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What is an Ornithologist?
An
ornithologist is a scientist who studies birds. Ornithologists study
how birds act, what their bodies are like, and where they live. Some
ornithologists study many kinds of birds and some study only a few
kinds or even only one kind of bird. There are other jobs that an
ornithologist might do. Some are teachers or tour guides.
What Do Ornithologists Do?
There
are many parts to an ornithologist's job. They study what birds do
and what is in the places where birds live. They record how many new
birds hatch (come out) from eggs and how birds act as a group. Some
follow how birds fly south when it is too cold and then come back
when it is warmer. Some work in special parks, nature reserves, where
birds are protected.
Where Does an Ornithologist Work?
Most
ornithologists work at nature reserves or similar places. Some teach
or research at colleges and universities. Some work at zoos, parks,
or as veterinarians. Ornithologists sometimes have to walk a lot
following birds outside or travel far from their homes to study
birds.
How to Become an Ornithologist
Most
ornithologists start out studying many kinds of animals or general
ecology. They need to study math very well also. Ornithologists write
lots of reports about their work so they must know how to write well.
After studying a lot, students must also work with birds a lot before
becoming an ornithologist.
There
are about 6,000 ornithologists working in the United States.
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